New website! Again.This is better than the last!

#1 Hey Tom,

Your site looks good but I think some of your translations didn't quite come through. Here are some suggestions for more natural-sounding English phrases... (I put my suggestions in parentheses.)

"my name is Tom Zhu. I have been committed to the development of the game.Favorite type FPS/TPS game."

(My name is Tom Zhu. I am committed to game development. My favorite game types are FPS and TPS.)

"I'm good at making war role, weapons, vehicles, buildings, props, aircraft, construction, indoor, outdoor, trees, natural rock, and production closed map open world game scene."

(I am good at making weapons, vehicles, buildings, props, aircraft, construction, indoor & outdoor, trees, natural rock, and production quality closed-map and open-world game scenes.) (I don't know what you mean by "war role".)

"Of course, it also produced particle effects and textures. I make and sell my own products, welcome to buy here. Your support is that I work for the biggest motivation."

(Of course, I also produce particle effects and textures. I make and sell my own products, and you are welcome to buy here. My biggest motivation is to support your work.)

Hope that helps!

#2 Chris,

You beat me to it. I was doing the same thing but you posted first. Just a language barrier thing I think. Thanks

Tom,

Site looks much better. It is brighter and is much easier to follow. If you do the English translation like Chris said, it will be very good. Nice changes!

Ron

#3 @Chris Calef and Ron kapaun
Thanks....

#4 Oh yeah, also "Upcoming soon" would work better if it was just "Coming soon".

Looking forward to your animations, they are looking great so far!


PS Your game is looking really good as well. There's a lot going on in there!

#5 The web looking good now! Much better as the old one :)

#6 @Chris...Thanks again...very much...

#7 Hi Tom,

I cannot tell by any of the images or animations. Are the helmets and other gear removable or is it all one mesh?

If I go to TurboSquid, most artists show a model in a T-pose with and or without accessories.

Is that possible?

Thanks

#8 @ Inflight
Possible. But you need to have a good 3Dart

#9 I asked YOU the questions.

I'm not interested in selling 3D models....

#10 Inflight - He means you need some skill with modelling. lol

Tom - the site looks great now. One thing I think you could change though: Times New Roman never looked good after the fall of the Roman Empire. Go with a nice sans serif font and the site will look much more professional.

Chris - Nice of you to supply those translations. :)

#11 Thanks, Dan.

Well, I guess I should have been more specific and asked if his model is similar to COD4 or Counter Strike. Where all of the gear is a separate removable mesh. So, apparently it is not.

3DS Max Rigging Tutorial COD4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7e390GbSLvs

#12 Hello, everybody.
Know? Friends. Chinese New Year.
Yesterday, I sat one day coach. Came to this mountain. There is almost no network. I finally found a network. Now I need to live here for 10 days, 10 days later. I will resume a normal life. The network will be restored patency.
I will make use of these days, I continued to produce the model package. Weapons package. Action package. These days you buy my KIT, please do not worry, I will still think of ways to send you the products you buy. Perhaps, this will make you more than wait for a few days. But, please believe me credit.

@Inflight...
I just sell Modle and Animations sequence...
:D

#13 Hello, everybody. I'm back. Back to Shanghai home.Now everything is normal.Welcome to buy my products.The new products will be introduced soon.In the past few days.