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Character Concept

by Ben Immel · in Game Design and Creative Issues · 05/10/2007 (7:55 pm) · 4 replies

Hey, this was my concept for a character I want to model, but I'm not sure about the proportions, so if anyone would like to criticize it, please, do so, I need some great advice!


Front View:

[IMG]http://images6.pictiger.com/thumbs/74/9279f90c90c785aa54732a5c2c8ef874.th.j...


Side View

[IMG]http://images6.pictiger.com/thumbs/79/4f97c04a8b68717a56e45725675ce879.th.j...


Thanks for any criticism! And please, DO criticize!

P.S. This is only the rough body shape, things like body armor and the head, clothes will be added later.
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David Britton
#1
07/20/2007 (3:46 pm)
It dosent look bad from what you got their but the head to me looks to be a little small in the first picture compared to the rest of the body. But still it looks good and if you want i can give you some good body armor concept drawings if you like .

Torque Owner AndrewOsborne
#2
07/20/2007 (5:08 pm)
On a quick observation...

the feet look too small
the arms look too wide
theres no real wrist
chest needs more definition
the chest comes out too wide on the side

Suggest looking/doing some research into human proportions - loomis comes to mind as it would be a great reference for your own work - Keep it up!


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Ben Immel
#3
07/20/2007 (7:39 pm)
Thanks guys, and sure, thatd be awsome David!

EDIT: I looked at it and see what you mean with the chest and stuff. The head and feet were just place holders though, so it wouldnt look too bad.

David Britton
#4
07/21/2007 (8:36 pm)
Hey ben i got a helmet design for you if you want to look at it let me know if you like it on my website and just sign the guest book and i can make mods to it if you think it needs something else or needs something taken off
im thinking about adding a com link thing to the side of it so he can talk to team mates and stuff but it is helmet concept 2
freewebs.com/somanyways