Post your made-up marble stories here!
by Kenneth Mair · in Marble Blast · 12/03/2003 (1:31 pm) · 63 replies
I'm a person who lives for humour and can laugh at anything, so I thought I'd make this post to provide some for me.
You can make up a story involving the marble on its adventures.
Starter:
This marble was doing Upward Spiral when it came across a Super Jump powerup.
"Hi!" said the marble, "Can I use you to get onto this here platform?"
"Sure!" said the Super Jump. The marble used it and missed the platform.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!" it said as it fell down and down and down and down and down until it fell into a time portal, swirling round and round, eating away at the marble.
"Mwahahahaha!" said this giant monster, chewing the marble. And at that moment, someone appeared in the distance.
"Don't fear! Marbleman is here!" he said as he flew up to the monster and slayed it with a gyro. He caught the marble in mid-air and used a gravity modifier to return the ground level.
"Thanx!" said the marble.
"No problem!" said Marbleman, "I will be happy to save you, even with the different marble textures! Goodbye, and may the marble-like force be with you!" Marbleman flew into the sky.
THE END
You can make up a story involving the marble on its adventures.
Starter:
This marble was doing Upward Spiral when it came across a Super Jump powerup.
"Hi!" said the marble, "Can I use you to get onto this here platform?"
"Sure!" said the Super Jump. The marble used it and missed the platform.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!" it said as it fell down and down and down and down and down until it fell into a time portal, swirling round and round, eating away at the marble.
"Mwahahahaha!" said this giant monster, chewing the marble. And at that moment, someone appeared in the distance.
"Don't fear! Marbleman is here!" he said as he flew up to the monster and slayed it with a gyro. He caught the marble in mid-air and used a gravity modifier to return the ground level.
"Thanx!" said the marble.
"No problem!" said Marbleman, "I will be happy to save you, even with the different marble textures! Goodbye, and may the marble-like force be with you!" Marbleman flew into the sky.
THE END
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#5
CHAPTER 2: Fasten Your Seatbelts!
The marble saw a Shock Absorber when he was falling. He grabbed it and used it just in time to land on a pink and purple platform.
"Where am I?" he said, spinning with confusion and dizziness.
"I've been waiting for you." said a voice, a big loud one to be exact.
"Who said that?"
"I am the evil Marblaxia! I wish to take over the world and destroy you. You must ride this coaster under 80 seconds to get past me! We shall meet again! Mwahahahaha!!!"
"Just you wait Marblaxia! I'll get you someday..." The marble hopped onto the coaster and shot off at 100kmh. "Aaaaah!" he screamed as he hung on to it round the corners. Then he noticed a gap in the track. "Oh nuts!" he said as he grabbed a passing Super Jump powerup. He used it just in time as the coaster fell out of bounds with a "whoosh.wav" playing. The marble flew up into the sky and landed on the finish pad with 1 second left. Success!
"You can't do this!" shouted Marblaxia, "I don't think you're ready for level 2, the Money Tree! Fahamumuhahahahamuha!" He vanished through an out-of-bounds trigger.
"I will defeat you!" said the marble as he leaped after him.
Coming soon: Chapter 3, the money tree!
12/17/2003 (12:05 am)
I'll write!CHAPTER 2: Fasten Your Seatbelts!
The marble saw a Shock Absorber when he was falling. He grabbed it and used it just in time to land on a pink and purple platform.
"Where am I?" he said, spinning with confusion and dizziness.
"I've been waiting for you." said a voice, a big loud one to be exact.
"Who said that?"
"I am the evil Marblaxia! I wish to take over the world and destroy you. You must ride this coaster under 80 seconds to get past me! We shall meet again! Mwahahahaha!!!"
"Just you wait Marblaxia! I'll get you someday..." The marble hopped onto the coaster and shot off at 100kmh. "Aaaaah!" he screamed as he hung on to it round the corners. Then he noticed a gap in the track. "Oh nuts!" he said as he grabbed a passing Super Jump powerup. He used it just in time as the coaster fell out of bounds with a "whoosh.wav" playing. The marble flew up into the sky and landed on the finish pad with 1 second left. Success!
"You can't do this!" shouted Marblaxia, "I don't think you're ready for level 2, the Money Tree! Fahamumuhahahahamuha!" He vanished through an out-of-bounds trigger.
"I will defeat you!" said the marble as he leaped after him.
Coming soon: Chapter 3, the money tree!
#7
The marble fell and fell down and down until he landed on level 2.
"There must be a secret stash of cash in this here tree!" said the excited marble.
Back at Upward Spiral...
Marblaxia found the 3D semicolon that the marble had left behind. He placed it into the hole in the console and he started to glow.
"Hehehe" said Marblaxia. He flew down to the money tree and started to play with the wiring...
Returning to the Money Tree...
The marble grabbed the gem at the root and rolled onto the elevator. But, it moved faster than it was meant to. He slammed into the roof of the tree and became stuck.
"Oh no! What's happened?" screamed the marble as he rolled about inside the trunk of the tree, shouting for help.
Suddenly, Marblaxia flew up to the marble.
"Hahahaha!" he said with glee. "I used the editor the sabotage the elevator and left you, stuck in the tree, thanks to the Torque Game Editor and that bug in the game. Now, I can crush you!"
Marblaxia slowly threw a giant hammer at the tree.
"What am I going to do?" said the marble as the hammer got closer and closer. "Hey!" He found a small button. He pressed it and the tree exploded into pieces. 1 dollar bills flew everywhere, floating out of bounds. As the money touched Marblaxia, a sparkling scent rubbed onto him. He screamed in pain, as he dissolved.
"Aaaaaah! I'll get you YET!!!!!" KAZZAM! He disappeared.
"Yeah! Alright!" said the marble as he fell down, into a level where marble meets blade...
COMING SOON: CHAPTER 4: WHAT GOES UP MUST STAY UP!
12/21/2003 (12:01 pm)
CHAPTER 3: The Money Tree!The marble fell and fell down and down until he landed on level 2.
"There must be a secret stash of cash in this here tree!" said the excited marble.
Back at Upward Spiral...
Marblaxia found the 3D semicolon that the marble had left behind. He placed it into the hole in the console and he started to glow.
"Hehehe" said Marblaxia. He flew down to the money tree and started to play with the wiring...
Returning to the Money Tree...
The marble grabbed the gem at the root and rolled onto the elevator. But, it moved faster than it was meant to. He slammed into the roof of the tree and became stuck.
"Oh no! What's happened?" screamed the marble as he rolled about inside the trunk of the tree, shouting for help.
Suddenly, Marblaxia flew up to the marble.
"Hahahaha!" he said with glee. "I used the editor the sabotage the elevator and left you, stuck in the tree, thanks to the Torque Game Editor and that bug in the game. Now, I can crush you!"
Marblaxia slowly threw a giant hammer at the tree.
"What am I going to do?" said the marble as the hammer got closer and closer. "Hey!" He found a small button. He pressed it and the tree exploded into pieces. 1 dollar bills flew everywhere, floating out of bounds. As the money touched Marblaxia, a sparkling scent rubbed onto him. He screamed in pain, as he dissolved.
"Aaaaaah! I'll get you YET!!!!!" KAZZAM! He disappeared.
"Yeah! Alright!" said the marble as he fell down, into a level where marble meets blade...
COMING SOON: CHAPTER 4: WHAT GOES UP MUST STAY UP!
#8
"Here's a hint" said Marbleman, "Roll diagonally instead of forwards. It makes you go faster!"
"Oh, thanx!" said the marble.
"And, that new marble texture of yours, it gives you more grip to get through the traffic."
"Uh... Marbleman, there's a traffic signal right there... behind you." Marbleman looked back.
"Oooops..."
The signal turned green and all the traffic stopped, making a nice wide path for the marble. He rolled through diagonally and beat the gold time.
"Yes!!!" shouted the marble with glee, as a golden block floated down in front of him. He collected it and was teleported to a new level.
Prepare for Chapter 7: THE MARBLE'S BIGGEST STEPS!
12/31/2003 (3:39 am)
Here's the end to your chapter!"Here's a hint" said Marbleman, "Roll diagonally instead of forwards. It makes you go faster!"
"Oh, thanx!" said the marble.
"And, that new marble texture of yours, it gives you more grip to get through the traffic."
"Uh... Marbleman, there's a traffic signal right there... behind you." Marbleman looked back.
"Oooops..."
The signal turned green and all the traffic stopped, making a nice wide path for the marble. He rolled through diagonally and beat the gold time.
"Yes!!!" shouted the marble with glee, as a golden block floated down in front of him. He collected it and was teleported to a new level.
Prepare for Chapter 7: THE MARBLE'S BIGGEST STEPS!
#10
Besides, here's your next chapter!
CHAPTER 8: MARBLAXIA'S CUSTOM LEVEL
The marble landed on the start pad and found himself in a world where no-one had boldly gone before!
"Lol!" said the marble. Then Marblaxia spawned in front of him.
"Welcome to my world!" said Marblaxia with a hideous evil rancid laugh. "This giant landmine will send you to space! Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! You will die, you puny, round, piece of lead! And, please collect my very own Lead Marble Powerup! *laughs again like the last time*" He disappeared. The marble looked at the ground as it changed into a muddy slope.
"Oh nuts!" said the marble, as he tried to stay on. But, he slid off and hit the landmine. He shot right up and 7000 miles per hour. Whoosh! The marble found himself flying through space. He bounced of the moon, the MIR II and fell into a black hole. But, fortunately, to the marble's luck, he found that the finish pad was inside the hole. He typed in his name, clicked on Continue and progressed to the next level, the world of Marbleman.
GET READY FOR CHAPTER 9: CHRISTMAS TREE!
12/31/2003 (8:12 am)
Just out of interest Henry, have you already made a level called The Honey Comb?Besides, here's your next chapter!
CHAPTER 8: MARBLAXIA'S CUSTOM LEVEL
The marble landed on the start pad and found himself in a world where no-one had boldly gone before!
"Lol!" said the marble. Then Marblaxia spawned in front of him.
"Welcome to my world!" said Marblaxia with a hideous evil rancid laugh. "This giant landmine will send you to space! Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! You will die, you puny, round, piece of lead! And, please collect my very own Lead Marble Powerup! *laughs again like the last time*" He disappeared. The marble looked at the ground as it changed into a muddy slope.
"Oh nuts!" said the marble, as he tried to stay on. But, he slid off and hit the landmine. He shot right up and 7000 miles per hour. Whoosh! The marble found himself flying through space. He bounced of the moon, the MIR II and fell into a black hole. But, fortunately, to the marble's luck, he found that the finish pad was inside the hole. He typed in his name, clicked on Continue and progressed to the next level, the world of Marbleman.
GET READY FOR CHAPTER 9: CHRISTMAS TREE!
#11
12/31/2003 (8:13 am)
HEY!!!! I HAD JUST WRITTEN IT THERE!!!!!!!!!
#13
01/01/2004 (9:27 am)
You must of posted yours when I was writing mine.
#16
01/11/2004 (7:36 am)
How about Solo? 
#18
01/11/2004 (8:27 am)
Literature, love it...
#20
01/11/2004 (9:31 am)
You can still make it up, even if it doesn't make sense. 
Kenneth Mair